There i see,the crust smiling...
There i see,the buds dancing...
There i see,the weeds jumping...
There i see,the clouds enjoying...
I sit thou placidly,
I enjoy life lucidly;
I feel the love every where,
I feel the sorrow no where...
Waiting for my paramour,
Waiting for my tryst,
Waiting for my dear,
Waiting for my bounty...
Finally! thy came...
Finally! thy brought my bounty...
Spill of blood everywhere,
I see the juvenile nowhere...
I feel my paramour nowhere,
I feel the grief every where...
9 comments:
i read your poem with my eyes wide..
did u write it with a dictionary beside :)
bye the way.. the blogs new look is good :)
he he
no sir,
i didnt had the dictionary! bt as i m a law skul aspirants i go through the word list n dis is the outcome....
r the words so difficult???
thanks 4 dat....
da previous 1 one the karamati done by a friend...
ultimately it luks gud....
thanks... :)
no words are not difficult but i felt you used them because you wanted to use them deaperately..
keep learning new words :)
writing thoughts releases tension and makes you feel free.. dont stop writing :):)
sir,
i have been really very bsy 4 my xams so nt really getting tym 4 my thoughts to be published in my blog!
hope to get sum tym to pen down sum words!
thanks :)
Hey, there you go the poet inside you :) Good job; keep it up.
I am glad to see your thoughts pointing towards the phases of life to take its course while reviling it to the world around it.
Life is blend with so many moments which has it reasons and things to say. I afraid they remain silent when over taken by the others. And the last two lines of your post say it all … somewhere we have lost living in it and feeling the grief at a latter stage.
Really, your thought has not come out so lucidly in your expressions in the poetic language. Still, I don't agree your last two lines as I know you very well.
Please keep it up your writing.
I like you and your writing very much.
A. P. Panda
(Mausa)
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