Here comes a life, personifying freshness, innocence and fear too...
Reluctantly enters the complicated yet magnificent world,
To clutch the multicolor of life!
Starts with appreciating and admiring things around her …
Loving the tits n bits of life…
Hating the complications of life…
And every moment trying to wipe them out,
To formulate a perfect world!
Slowly, slowly she gets trapped …
In the world’s complexities,
The worldly affairs she had always hated,
Has now become a part of her existence,
Has become a new ambition, the one she had never thought of,
The one that changes her life diametrically…
She becomes selfish, not for herself but for herself .
The world reduces for her,
A small representative of human community is her life now…
Her responsibilities restrict her thinking…
Fear increases and she becomes weak…
For her love!!!
Now bothers for the cost of loosing her life,
Bothers for loosing herself,
Wants to get trapped in the world for years more,
Just for the community she has created …
Or the one gifted to her by the world!
Life is beautiful …
But the living beings are capricious,
The essence of life dissolves
And a condensed form is liked by her…
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4 comments:
life is indeed beautiful but................................
the sense of responsibility,the desire to touch the sky,the expectations have forced the people to lead a stressfull life where people dont hav time for themself.
this blog speaks the heart of every females who wants 2 b happy like others but everythng changes with the time.dreams are lost.there is no life at al.stl they are the one who has 2 do everythng.and they are the first person to be blamed.
how much broad mind we are stl we are a part of the society where at a mass every1 has a narrow mind which cant be changed.and we are a part of it.so no 1 s to be blamed.its each and every1's fault due to which they are leading such life...............is there any1 who can help?
Its a lovely poem, makes you think deeper into the world around us, but brings a tear thinking of things we wish we could do but are helpless!
keep writing such nice, beautiful poems mamuni :)
ya as i said it's quite close to mah heart! i was very down at dat tym! :)
Well.. the thoughts are very well rendered. But when you have to traverse through such a complicated scenario, a prose would be more apt than a piece of poetry. I believe when it comes to poem, we should always make it as sweet as possible, as rhyming as rhythm that would steal a beat off our heart.. that would make your lips tap.. But nevertheless - lovely work !!! Liked it :)
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